Duality

Stopped running.

Monday, November 06, 2006

Tear-soaked rims


Grilled for ages: compromise,
sacrifice!
Selfishness, the height of vice!
What to do about the eyes
that cry,
if I live for me, myself and I?



8 Messages:

Blogger Woman?? said...

To all:
This conversation made me put this post up.
Some answers?
Anyone?

8:22 am  
Blogger therapy said...

I dont mind woman..

I hope you find your answers.

My only observation, based on my own life, is that everything and everyone you have in your life, is based on your choices. I'm never stuck with something because I was made to/born with it/ have had to live with it.

Its always a choice. Even if I hate the nose I was born with, my keeping it, is my choice.
If I dont have enough money to get a new nose, its because I chose not to fight for one.

I have have meandered a bit, but I hope you get the point:)

Line 3 of your poem is what I referred to the other day!

8:40 am  
Blogger therapy said...

http://parisbreakfasts.blogspot.com/

a common passion

8:48 am  
Blogger Woman?? said...

Thinkpotty:

Perhaps it touched a sensitive spot.
Perhaps we share some questions in life.
Perhaps I don't know how to write.
:-)

11:26 am  
Blogger Mahima said...

What to do about the eyes that cry
If I live for me, myself and I??

Lovely lines. :)

I like these two, though I agree with therapy, its your choice at the end of the day. Maybe you could let them cry.... if you don't like to see them cry, then maybe, just maybe do you need to redefine your "I"???

2:01 pm  
Blogger Monolith... said...

thanks for visiting. not the most cheerful blog mine. but thanks. truly. and not for just dropping in.

7:43 pm  
Blogger Mahima said...

By the way... delete that last bloody sentence of mine: "Redefine I". nonsense - don't ever redefine your "Me, myself and I"

4:16 am  
Blogger Hari Adivarekar said...

oooh....I love terse verse. Each word really makes you think and then you can play around with the words as well and conjure up tons of conclusions/possibilities.

5:53 am  

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